What do you think of this poem I wrote? :]]?

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i'm 13 =) love write. ones kinda sad :p
think of it? how can improve?
(be polite)

thankss =)



fall to, black hole.
eats me alive, takes soul
i’m vulnerable, easy steal
i’m going down, last wheel,
taking me under, rip out heart
forget rest, tear me apart,
tried, failed. else can done?
drowned waves, burnt sun,
how long can last? when end?
soon? no. can pretend.
strive live, struggle , fight,
ropes tangle me, pulling tight
escape pain, free mind
floating here, i’m confined
rip these chains, let me
need hear, need see.
i’m done hurt, no more tears
i’ll conquer this, scare fears
find place, position feet
take me this, rip off sheet
i’ll find way, see in dark
wont forget you, left mark.

i'm 13 =) love write. ones kinda sad :p think of it? how can improve? (be polite) thankss =) fall to, black hole. eats me alive, takes soul i’m vulnerable, easy steal i’m going down, last wheel, taking me under, rip out heart forget rest, tear me...


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