I am an ametuar writer. Please tell me what you think of my poetry?

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under umbrella
days have gone by,
, years have passed.
time has flown,
, things have changed.
looking back,
@ bright eyed girl,
think maybe somethings never change,
maybe somethings last forever.

dust on frame
cant hide wide popsicle smile
comes delight
@ looking @ rain under umbrella.
hard not smile
@ her.
, mind wonders
magic
of looking @ rain
under old umbrella.

days have gone by,
, years have passed.
time has flown,
, things have changed.
, looking
hope somethings never change,
somethings last forever.
more that,
hope she'll
live past forever
, find simple joy
in looking @ rain under umbrella.

im not sure makes sense else. or if absolutly horrible. love writing.i have tons of poetry, , might put more peoples opinions.thanks!

from under umbrella days have gone by, , years have passed. time has flown, , things have changed. looking back, @ bright eyed girl, think maybe somethings never change, maybe somethings last forever. dust on frame cant hide wide popsicle smile comes from...


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