To all that like poetry... can you?
first of all, "you never know got till it's gone," copyrighted material, means can't legally use yours!!!
second, although you've put words in poetic format, it's not poem; more of complaint in prose. there's no rhyme, meter, imagery or other poetic devices.
third, @ least tried. have give credit that.
if poetry can suggest me how can improve poem.. , if there can rate please..thanks...
http://www.poetry.com/voteforme/poemvote1.asp?pid=12254062
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