Can someone please help me with my english? Automotive retail cover letter?

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made cover letter below. let me know can changed/added or modified. highly appreciated. going tomorrow morning on job search.

dear manager,
i've been purchasing tools , spare parts store months, admiring vast selection of products got there , wishing work there. until wasn't possible. today, however, i'm in position apply part time/casual retail salespersons job providing got vacancies.
decided write cover letter introduce myself , ask in-person meeting discuss looking for. work part time mechanic subaru ******* , study @ ******** completing advanced diploma of automotive management. therefore availability limited weekends (saturday , sunday full day) until december.
have worked in few automotive workshops, working on vast range of japanese , european vehicles. searching correct reliable spare parts 1 of biggest objectives had @ work, made me apply job , learn how provide customers correct reliable spare part/tool according need.
furthermore in past subway restaurant supervisor have learned lot customer service , how happy customer promote business whereas unhappy customer demote business.
in overseas have background worked on lot on cars , doing car sales father owns car yard, hence reason became mechanic.
seek opportunity further develop customer service , managing skills , think better career path in long run. hope knowledge in vehicles advantage job.
if you'd schedule interview me, , hope do, please call me on ********* , state date , time , i'll there.

sincerely,

**********

i made cover letter below. let me know can changed/added or modified. highly appreciated. going tomorrow morning on job search. dear manager, i've been purchasing tools , spare parts store months, admiring vast selection of products got there , wishing i...


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